Yeah, it would.
If you're able to you could always make an alt on a different server to check out gear.
It sounds like that could work and seems pretty solid. I'd throw it at some other peeps too to see their feed back.
If you want to stick to lore, Gloom is only in Mor Dhona as stated before, so you'll want to keep that in mind as others might not want to roleplay Gloom being outside of there.
Highlights in the hair is a good idea, along with the face/body paint. You could do away with the tattoos and go for body paint instead.
It definitely came off a bit awkward. It sounds a bit better, but I'd differently ask for more feedback to see how others read it. You might also be able to condense it. Its a lot to read and some of what you have, even outside of the special weather section repeats a bit.
He definitely reminds me of lava/fire/maybe a sunset?
Hope that helps! There's not much more I can add to it, lol.
If you're able to you could always make an alt on a different server to check out gear.
It sounds like that could work and seems pretty solid. I'd throw it at some other peeps too to see their feed back.
If you want to stick to lore, Gloom is only in Mor Dhona as stated before, so you'll want to keep that in mind as others might not want to roleplay Gloom being outside of there.
Highlights in the hair is a good idea, along with the face/body paint. You could do away with the tattoos and go for body paint instead.
It definitely came off a bit awkward. It sounds a bit better, but I'd differently ask for more feedback to see how others read it. You might also be able to condense it. Its a lot to read and some of what you have, even outside of the special weather section repeats a bit.
He definitely reminds me of lava/fire/maybe a sunset?
Hope that helps! There's not much more I can add to it, lol.
