(08-26-2016, 11:33 PM)Warren Castille Wrote: Lancefer earnestly didn't care about his future and wanted to spend it with Verah; He dies valiantly saving her life and she's left with the reality that her actions caused his death.
This is more along the lines of what I was looking for but it was a scenerio I already pictured as an option.
(08-26-2016, 11:33 PM)Warren Castille Wrote: Lancefer is dead. The assassins pin the blame on Verah, who is forced to flee and attempt to redeem her name. She's opposed by the family, who believes she is the villain.
Verah killed Lancefer and made up the assassination attempt, strictly to get his wealth and material possessions.
I probably didn't mention it before, but Verah is intended to be a Neutral Good/Chaotic Good character so killing him isn't really in that realm of personality. Plus she actually loved him and because of her alignment, she wouldn't be able to really kill him.
The rest of these kind of ignore parts of the story that are already pretty fleshed out and solid. That might be my fault, I'll go back through it and see if I phrased anything in here that might be a little confusing or carelessly-worded.
But I'm looking for help finishing this by ironing out the details. Sorry if that wasn't clear in the opening post.
Unfortunately your suggestions are things I can't use, though I appreciate the effort.
 
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