A simple rule my friend told me when I use to write magic mage stories.
"If the move sounds utterly ridiculous, it probably is utterly ridiculous. "
Example, you're a runestone.Â
'Mage Ex blinks and a ifrit hot ball of fire begins to burns through her opponent"
^ ridiculous.Â
"Mage Ex arced their hand out in a sweeping motion leasing an array of dense small bullet like fireballs at their opponent."
^ not ridiculous.
"If the move sounds utterly ridiculous, it probably is utterly ridiculous. "
Example, you're a runestone.Â
'Mage Ex blinks and a ifrit hot ball of fire begins to burns through her opponent"
^ ridiculous.Â
"Mage Ex arced their hand out in a sweeping motion leasing an array of dense small bullet like fireballs at their opponent."
^ not ridiculous.
Kevin Gates - Told Me
