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Noble Ishgardian Idea Needs Critique - Neryem - 07-20-2017 Howdy again. I've been working on an elezen character for some time now and was hoping to get some feedback here since I don't know the exact specifics when it comes to Ishgardian lore. Without further ado: Ex-Ishardian Noble
RE: Noble Ishgardian Idea Needs Critique - Kieron Lohengrin - 07-21-2017 I love elezen and I'm a sucker for knightly/chivalric toons. My suggestions would be: - play through the Convictory & Scholasticate side quests, as well as the 51-60 DRK job quests to get a better idea of Ishgardian religious dynamics and how being highborn/lowborn informs so much of their society - the magitek prosthetic sounds like it would be a commissioned project from Garlond Ironworks, unless you're going to have her build it herself - if you want further drama you could write that her arm was chomped off by one of Nidhogg's horde, giving her a hatred of dragons that lasts even after the war's end RE: Noble Ishgardian Idea Needs Critique - Neryem - 07-21-2017 (07-21-2017, 05:26 AM)Kieron Lohengrin Wrote: I love elezen and I'm a sucker for knightly/chivalric toons. My suggestions would be:I'll totally go through all of those things and apply them to the character. Thanks for the help! |