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[Please Help] Character Idea - GhostlyMaiden - 12-17-2015

I made an alt! I've had an idea for her for quite a while, but never put it down on paper. I have now done that and have written out a general idea for her backstory. 

For my own sake, I have it in a google doc. I will happily provide the shareable link so people can actually see it. 
Google doc
My own personal thoughts are also included in the doc, so I apologize if things seem a bit unorganized or unnecessary. 

I don't know enough about Garleans to add detail. What I mean is, I didn't provide a lot of details about Garlean ranks (since it is kinda important) since it is just a rough draft....yeah...

I want to know what you guys think, what I should probably add or take away. I want to know if you think something is lore breaking, or something that is too over the top. I want this character to be successful, not a character that people will just ignore.


RE: [Please Help] Character Idea - MissMizzy - 12-17-2015

(12-17-2015, 10:49 AM)I like her! I actually have an alt with the Name Mirabelle Rosalian...which is funny as your character has Bellerose. ANYWAY the story is unique, but there is tons of room there to really have potential as a very fun and deep character to develop. The lore sounds pretty accurate as well if your going to follow that. Love her Wrote: I made an alt! I've had an idea for her for quite a while, but never put it down on paper. I have now done that and have written out a general idea for her backstory. 

For my own sake, I have it in a google doc. I will happily provide the shareable link so people can actually see it. 
Google doc
My own personal thoughts are also included in the doc, so I apologize if things seem a bit unorganized or unnecessary. 

I don't know enough about Garleans to add detail. What I mean is, I didn't provide a lot of details about Garlean ranks (since it is kinda important) since it is just a rough draft....yeah...

I want to know what you guys think, what I should probably add or take away. I want to know if you think something is lore breaking, or something that is too over the top. I want this character to be successful, not a character that people will just ignore.



RE: [Please Help] Character Idea - Sounsyy - 12-17-2015

(12-17-2015, 10:49 AM)GhostlyMaiden Wrote: I don't know enough about Garleans to add detail. What I mean is, I didn't provide a lot of details about Garlean ranks (since it is kinda important) since it is just a rough draft....yeah...

Can help there! ^^

On Garlean Hierarchy Volume 1 Wrote:The rise of the Garlean Empire in the Year 1522 of the Sixth Astral Era led to significant changes in the structure of the Garlean society. This is most evident in the adoption of titles which serve to indicate an individual's place within the social hierarchy. The following information was compiled with the aid of informants within the empire and has yet to be verified:

Royalty
Zos - The emperor
Yae - Member of the royal family in line of succession
Wir - Member of the royal family with no claim to the throne.

Military
Van - Legatus (Commands a Legion)
Tol - Tribunus laticlavius or Tribunus militum (Commands a Cohor)
Sas - Tribunus angusticlavius or Praefectus castrorum (Commands Castrums)
Rem - Primus pilus or Pilus prior (Commands a Manipulus)
Quo - Primi ordines or Centurion (Commands a Centuriae)
Pyr - Optio, Tesserarius, or Decurion (Cavalry Officer)
Oen - Duplicarius or Legionarius (Footsoldier?)

Specialists
Nan - Chief engineer or engineer
Mal - Primus medicus or senior magitek technician
Lux - Chief medicus or magitek technician
Kir - Senior medicus or senior technician
Jen - Medicus or technician

On Garlean Hierarchy Volume 2 Wrote:Public Officials
Iyl - Dictator or Princeps senatus
Het - Consul, Praetor, Tribunus plebis, Aedilis, or Quaestor
Goe - Censor
Fae - Unknown
Eir - Unknown
Dus - Lictor

This hierarchy extends to the general populace as well, though it is far less complex. The majority of citizens bear the "Ban" title, and there is a smaller group which appears to be comprised of respected artisans who have adopted the "Cen" title.

The "Aan" title is bestowed upon the peoples of annexed territories and indicates that they lack even the most basic rights afforded to a citizen. However, many Garleans view this as an opportunity rather than a condemnation, as citizenship may be granted to those who have demonstrated exceptional skills, as well as those who have contributed twenty or more years of military service.

The Raven: Garlean Movements Wrote:Before I launch into an explanation of this development, dear reader, allow me to provide some background on Garlean military structure. The imperial army is composed of large-scale units known as legions. Of the fourteen such units believed to exist, it is the VIIth Imperial Legion, commanded by Legatus Nael van Darnus, that currently threatens our hearths and homes.

According to our sources, each legion is comprised of ten infantry battalions known as cohors. These cohors are further broken down into three companies, or manipuli. Finally, a manipulus consists of two platoons, or centuriae.

Our troubles lie with this last unit. Previously, the Empire pushed into our territory with entire manipuli. Recent days, however, have seen the attacks scaled back to the smaller centuriae.

“But surely,” you must be thinking, “Would that not make them easier to defeat?” Unfortunately, the answer is a resounding “nay.” Respected adventurers have described these centuria units functioning as elite shock troops—platoons that are provisioned with the latest in magitek weaponry.

Twin Adder strategists theorize that the Empire seeks to prevent the Eorzean Alliance from amassing by deploying these smaller detachments to threaten the realm on multiple fronts.

Fernehalwes Wrote:You look at the Garleans and again, the Garleans are a different race, the pure-blood ones with the third eye. But when you look at the army they have people of all races because they go and subjugate a nation and tell people they can gain citizenship if you join our army and prove your worth. So that’s why you have so many soldiers that are Elezen, because all the real Garleans are back home ruling while their conscripts conquer the land, sometimes using the magic that they can’t.

Merewina Wrote:The Garleans are an enigmatic race of people from a massive empire situated to the north and east of Eorzea, and despite coming from a realm so large, remarkably little is known about them. As few have ever seen them without their armor, rumors about their physical makeup are many, some of the more "coloful" claims being that they implant machina in their bodies to improve agility and strength, and that they possess a third eye allowing them to see in all directions at once. Though, I would assume there is little truth to these sailor's tales.

Letter from the Producer Live XXVII Wrote:The next question had to deal with the functionality of the Garleans’ third eye (a question that a lot of people ask me personally at Fan Fests and game shows). Oda-san had an answer prepared for this one as well, so I read what he gave me. This pretty much stated that the third eye is believed to considerably improve the race’s capacity for spatial recognition. Because of this, the Garleans have a decided advantage over other races when it comes to navigating aircraft or firing weapons. I then bring up Cid’s bandana and the legatii’s helms...but Yoshi-P says that armor has been designed not to interfere with the workings of the 3rd eye.

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RE: [Please Help] Character Idea - GhostlyMaiden - 12-17-2015

(12-17-2015, 11:43 AM)Sounsyy Wrote:
(12-17-2015, 10:49 AM)GhostlyMaiden Wrote: I don't know enough about Garleans to add detail. What I mean is, I didn't provide a lot of details about Garlean ranks (since it is kinda important) since it is just a rough draft....yeah...

Can help there! ^^



Additional Garlean lore you may find helpful can be found in the links below:
-The Rise and Fall of the White Raven
-Garlean Political Structure
-Garlean Invasion and Castrums

This is very helpful, thank you very much. \^o^/