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[Feedback] AG Character Wiki 1.0 - ɴᴘᴄ - 08-27-2015
After a few weeks hammering a little at a time, Ancel's initial character page is finally done.
Comments:
- Main thrust was to illustrate background and motivation, where he comes from and why he lives as he does.
- Intentionally omitted references to Main Scenario and attempted to flesh out other adventuring experiences.
- Slight fiddling with terminology regarding game verbiage while trying to avoid being too worldbuildy.
Concerns:
- Observation of canon or misattribution of lore is to be avoided.
- There's possible redundancy within the narrative, and/or too many repeated references.
- The style of prose was meant to be slightly floral in places. Might be inappropriate for a wiki.
- Format is a reworked hybrid of a few templates, but may not flow as well as it could.
If you'd care to read or comment, please feel free. Thanks as always.